Friday, June 3, 2016

EunYoung Kim / Assignment 2 / Fri 3-4

3 comments:

  1. Date : 6/17/2016
    Speaker: EunYoung Kim
    Evaluator: EunYoung Kim

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    The speaker introduced the specific steps of plant growth and development.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    Hopefully, the audience got to know the subject well.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes I hope so.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes the speaker spoke in a clear voice.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes the speech had a definite opening, body, and conclusion.

    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    The speaker checked her notes often and made eye contact from time to time.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    The speaker could have inserted more media related to plant growth.

    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    Overall, I liked that the steps were organized in the whole speech.

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Date : 6.17
    Speaker:Kim Eun Young
    Evaluator:Lim Mijeong
    Title :Second assignment

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    her tone is very soft. so l could listen to speech very comfortably.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    we can understand how plants grow and develope.
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes. she prepared well.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    her voice was adeqaute and diction was also good.
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    yes. her speech was very constructive. so we can listen to her speech very easily.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    her has little eye contact with audience and saw her script continuously. It would be better to see her audience more.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    If she practiced eye contact more, her speech would be better.
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    i really like her upright posture.

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  3. Date : 6/17/2016
    Speaker : Eun Young Kim
    Evalutor : Yi Joon Kim

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    : The speaker has very clear pronunciation, which makes audiences understand the content.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    : The audience got to know the speech with the speaker's pronuciation, grammatical clarity, and organized way to explain the subject.
    3. Did the speech reflecy adequate preparation?
    : Yes.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    : Yes. And it made the speech better.
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    : Yes.
    6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
    : I think the speaker was trying to make more eye contact, but it would be much better if there were more eye contacts.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    : More eye contacts.
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    : I really like the way she explains her subject.

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