Saturday, June 4, 2016

seo seung yeon/ assignment2/ friday34

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  1. Date: June 17th
    Speaker: Seo Seung yeon
    Evaluator: Song Ji yeon

    1. What strong poins does the speaker haver?
    The speaker's tone and speed are really stable.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    The audience got to know specifically about places around hufs and what you can do there in details.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes. It was really detailed. There was powerpoint presentation, and the speaker talked specifically about her recommendations based on her experiences.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes. It was really clear and easy to understand.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes. It was not hard to tell them apart. She draws attention in opening, details in body, and summing up in conclusion.

    6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes and eye contact.
    There were a lot of eye contacts. I don't think she relied too much on notes, but I think it would have been better if she relied more on memory.

    7. It was a bit hard to tell what was on powerpoint, and the background noise was a bit loud. But overall it was really great.

    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    Her speed is really stable and she does not seem much nervous. It was really great. I also liked the specific informations of restaurant menu and other places. :):)

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Speaker: 서승연
    Evaluator:서승연
    Title :First assignment

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    i guess my topic is based on my own experience so the detail of my script was good
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    i used ppt as a visual aid but i couldn't find a place where i can use projecter... so that hindered my speech
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    i made ppt and tried to memorize the script
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    yes my diction was clear
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    yes. when i write the script i tried to make clear structure
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    yes i tried
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    Find better place to give a presentation...
    Work on memorizing script
    8. What did you like about the presentation? my diction, gesture

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