Speaking Feedback Date : 2016/06/11 Speaker; son ji yeon Evaluator: choi ji yun Title : how to pack lightly
1. What strong points does the speaker have? In her ppt, she gave organized-text information(I only gave pictures). It looks very simple and profitable
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? they understood well. She talks easily to understand.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes.but it would be more nicer if she prepare for being calm
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes I think.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes she has
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She looks a little nervous. Her eye keeps shaking
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Maybe she should prepare for being calm. Her nervous makes hard audience to concentrate a little
8. What did you like about the presentation? I like her easy explanation and that she memorized the long text.
Feedback by Seoyeon Choi Firstly, the slides were simple and neat to look at. They made it easier to concentrate. Your speech was straightforward, explaining ways to pack lightly yet it would have been better if you spoke somewhat louder and refrain from swaying side to side. When I was watching you speak I didn't really notice the movements but on the video you can see it clearly quite often. It would be great if you can make steady eye contact with the audience next time!
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 2016/06/11
Speaker; son ji yeon
Evaluator: choi ji yun
Title : how to pack lightly
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
In her ppt, she gave organized-text information(I only gave pictures). It looks very simple and profitable
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
they understood well. She talks easily to understand.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes.but it would be more nicer if she prepare for being calm
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes I think.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes she has
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She looks a little nervous. Her eye keeps shaking
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Maybe she should prepare for being calm. Her nervous makes hard audience to concentrate a little
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I like her easy explanation and that she memorized the long text.
Feedback by Seoyeon Choi
ReplyDeleteFirstly, the slides were simple and neat to look at. They made it easier to concentrate. Your speech was straightforward, explaining ways to pack lightly yet it would have been better if you spoke somewhat louder and refrain from swaying side to side. When I was watching you speak I didn't really notice the movements but on the video you can see it clearly quite often. It would be great if you can make steady eye contact with the audience next time!