Date : 6/17/2016 Speaker: MiJeong Lim Evaluator: EunYoung Kim
1. What strong points does the speaker have? The speaker spoke very clearly with confidence.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? The audience got to know a lot about various types of nail art.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes the speaker seemed to have prepared well for the speech.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes the speaker spoke clearly and audibly.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes the speech did.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. The speaker checked her notes only from time to time and made a lot of eye contact.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? The speaker could have introduced the prices of all the appliances.
8. What did you like about the presentation? Overall, I like that the speaker used sufficient media and that she did her research well.
Speaking Feedback Date : 6.17 Speaker:Lim Mijeong Evaluator:Lim Mijeong Title :Second assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Materials about topic was well prepared. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? I hope so. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. I prepared well. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? My voice was adeqaute and diction was good. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? yes. my speech was very constructive. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. i had little eye contact with audience and saw my script continuously. It would be better to see my audience more. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? If i practiced eye contact more, my speech would be better. 8. What did you like about the presentation? diction was good.
Speaking Feedback Date : 6/17 Speaker: Mijeong Lim Evaluator: Minyoung Jang Title : About nail art
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Clearly voice 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Trough her speech, the audience can get the useful tips about nail art 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? It would be great if she memorize more in her speech script. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Absolutely 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. As I said before, I suggest that she memorize her script more. If she does, she could do more eye contact with the audiences. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I think she need to summerize in concluding part 8. What did you like about the presentation? Her clearly voice and beautiful smile :)
Date : 6/17/2016
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: MiJeong Lim
Evaluator: EunYoung Kim
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
The speaker spoke very clearly with confidence.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
The audience got to know a lot about various types of nail art.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes the speaker seemed to have prepared well for the speech.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes the speaker spoke clearly and audibly.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes the speech did.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
The speaker checked her notes only from time to time and made a lot of eye contact.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
The speaker could have introduced the prices of all the appliances.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Overall, I like that the speaker used sufficient media and that she did her research well.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 6.17
Speaker:Lim Mijeong
Evaluator:Lim Mijeong
Title :Second assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Materials about topic was well prepared.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I hope so.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. I prepared well.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
My voice was adeqaute and diction was good.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
yes. my speech was very constructive.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
i had little eye contact with audience and saw my script continuously. It would be better to see my audience more.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
If i practiced eye contact more, my speech would be better.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
diction was good.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 6/17
Speaker: Mijeong Lim
Evaluator: Minyoung Jang
Title : About nail art
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Clearly voice
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Trough her speech, the audience can get the useful tips about nail art
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
It would be great if she memorize more in her speech script.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Absolutely
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
As I said before, I suggest that she memorize her script more. If she does, she could do more eye contact with the audiences.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think she need to summerize in concluding part
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Her clearly voice and beautiful smile :)