Date : 6/17/2016 Speaker: Yi Joon Kim Evaluator: Eun Young Kim
1. What strong points does the speaker have? The speaker spoke in a clear voice and made eye contact often.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? The audience got to know and empathize with the subject a lot.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes the speech reflected a lot of preparation.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes the speaker talked audibly. It was not hard to understand the speaker.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes the speech had a definite opening, body, and conclusion.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. The speaker made a lot of eye contact and checked her notes only from time to time.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? The speaker could have talked more about her experiences.
8. What did you like about the presentation? Overall the speaker gave a good presentation. It was not difficult to grasp the speech subject and the topic itself was interesting.
Speaking Feedback Date : 6/17 Speaker: Yi joon Kim Evaluator: Minyoung Jang Title : About nail art
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Nice PPT & explanation 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Trough her speech, the audiences can get the useful tips about how the rumor can spread. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? It would be great if she eye contact to audiences. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. I suggest that she memorize her script more. If she does, she could do more eye contact with the audiences. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I think she need to speech more clear and light voice. 8. What did you like about the Harmony with PPT and explanation:)
Date : 6/17/2016 Speaker: Yi Joon Kim Evaluator: Yi Joon Kim
Self Evaluation
1. What strong points does the speaker have? : The strong point is my voice tone which I think could make the audience focus on my speech. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? : Yes, hopefully. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? : Yes. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? : Yes. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? : Yes. It has clear opening, body, and conclusion. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. : The speaker was trying to make more eye contacts in the video, but I think that's not enough. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? : More visual aids in PPT slides, and more eye contacts. 8. What did you like about the presentation? : I liked that the speaker gave some pauses between sentences, which emphsized each sentence or content.
Speaking Feedback Date : 6.18 Speaker: Kim Yi Joon Evaluator: Sue Min Hwang Title : Hawaii, why not?
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She had a great voice
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? It was all in her script
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? She was very clear 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
It was not enough for the audience
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? More visual aid
Date : 6/17/2016
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Yi Joon Kim
Evaluator: Eun Young Kim
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
The speaker spoke in a clear voice and made eye contact often.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
The audience got to know and empathize with the subject a lot.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes the speech reflected a lot of preparation.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes the speaker talked audibly. It was not hard to understand the speaker.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes the speech had a definite opening, body, and conclusion.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
The speaker made a lot of eye contact and checked her notes only from time to time.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
The speaker could have talked more about her experiences.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Overall the speaker gave a good presentation. It was not difficult to grasp the speech subject and the topic itself was interesting.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 6/17
Speaker: Yi joon Kim
Evaluator: Minyoung Jang
Title : About nail art
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Nice PPT & explanation
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Trough her speech, the audiences can get the useful tips about how the rumor can spread.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
It would be great if she eye contact to audiences.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I suggest that she memorize her script more. If she does, she could do more eye contact with the audiences.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think she need to speech more clear and light voice.
8. What did you like about the
Harmony with PPT and explanation:)
Date : 6/17/2016
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Yi Joon Kim
Evaluator: Yi Joon Kim
Self Evaluation
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
: The strong point is my voice tone which I think could make the audience focus on my speech.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
: Yes, hopefully.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
: Yes.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
: Yes.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
: Yes. It has clear opening, body, and conclusion.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
: The speaker was trying to make more eye contacts in the video, but I think that's not enough.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
: More visual aids in PPT slides, and more eye contacts.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
: I liked that the speaker gave some pauses between sentences, which emphsized each sentence or content.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 6.18
Speaker: Kim Yi Joon
Evaluator: Sue Min Hwang
Title : Hawaii, why not?
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She had a great voice
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
It was all in her script
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
She was very clear
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
It was not enough for the audience
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
More visual aid
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Overall well prepared.