Dongwon Kang: Your brief outline of the presentation was really helpful for me to expect the overall contents of your speech and you made active interactions with the audience which showed your enthusiasm about your presentation but it would be a more organized and structured speech if you try to reduce the frequency of unnecessary pauses next time.
What I have noticed from my own presentation is that, The introduction, body and conclusion was well put, I made good eye contact with the audience and tried to let them participate in the presentation. However, I need to work more on avoiding too much pauses between each sentence, while doing a presentation.
As a person who was one of the audience, Hermela's presentation was the most interesting one. I feel that she made a great and briliantt use of her own character, her speaking about Ethiopia and coffee would be not that much attractive if it was chosen by someone else. Moreover, she looked more energetic than before, and I believe she got perfect topic for her this time!!! But if you have more confidence and clearness, it would be better!!
Dongwon Kang: Your brief outline of the presentation was really helpful for me to expect the overall contents of your speech and you made active interactions with the audience which showed your enthusiasm about your presentation but it would be a more organized and structured speech if you try to reduce the frequency of unnecessary pauses next time.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dongwon Kang, your comment is helpful.
ReplyDeleteWhat I have noticed from my own presentation is that, The introduction, body and conclusion was well put, I made good eye contact with the audience and tried to let them participate in the presentation. However, I need to work more on avoiding too much pauses between each sentence, while doing a presentation.
ReplyDeleteAs a person who was one of the audience, Hermela's presentation was the most interesting one. I feel that she made a great and briliantt use of her own character, her speaking about Ethiopia and coffee would be not that much attractive if it was chosen by someone else. Moreover, she looked more energetic than before, and I believe she got perfect topic for her this time!!! But if you have more confidence and clearness, it would be better!!
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