First of all, I'd like to thank you for your interesting presentation about Taylor Swift. I liked how you were very organized and had a firm voice with good eye contact. You seemed very prepared and I could see your notes as well. One thing that I thought could be improved was your gesture. Because you were standing behind a podium, I couldn't really see any hand or body movement. Such gestures could have made your speech more interesting. Also, you might want to put change in your voice, such as pauses, inflection, or accents to make it more attention grabbing as well. Beside this, the speech was great.
by Sun Jin Kim
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I'd like to thank you for your interesting presentation about Taylor Swift. I liked how you were very organized and had a firm voice with good eye contact. You seemed very prepared and I could see your notes as well. One thing that I thought could be improved was your gesture. Because you were standing behind a podium, I couldn't really see any hand or body movement. Such gestures could have made your speech more interesting. Also, you might want to put change in your voice, such as pauses, inflection, or accents to make it more attention grabbing as well. Beside this, the speech was great.
Also, you had a good structure of introduction, body, and conclusion. The overall material of the speech was delivered well to the audience.
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