Speaking Feedback Date :4.21 Speaker:임미정 Evaluator:서승연 Title :First assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have? she explained tour to Japan very well. her gesture and tone was good 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? her speech had helped audience to know what they gotta do when they go to the trip to japan 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? she wrote good script which has many quality examples 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? her diction was good but she can work on trying to memorize the script 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? yes. though conclusion was bit short 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. she can work on making an eye contact 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? she can memorize the script and a little bit more eye contact would make her speech more perfect 8. What did you like about the presentation? her diction and her script
Speaking Feedback Date : 4/22 Speaker: Mijeong Lim Evaluator: Minyoung Jang Title : About Japan
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Clearly voice 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Trough her speech, the audience can get the useful tips about traveling Japan. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? It would be great if she memorize more in her speech script. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Absolutely 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. As I said before, I suggest that she memorize her script more. If she does, she could do more eye contact with the audiences. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I think she need to summerize in concluding part 8. What did you like about the presentation? Her clearly voice and beautiful smile :)
Speaking Feedback Date : 4/22 Speaker: Lim Mijeong Evaluator: Lim Mijeong Title : First Assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have? I spoke clearly and loudly. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Audience can listen to my speech comfortably because I explained structure of my speech head of it. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Audience can use my speech in reality because I search information specifically about Japan. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Maybe. I tried to speak clearly but I were not audible. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. the structure of speech is constructive. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. I couldn't memorize the script. So I couldn't have eye contact at all. If I practiced more, I would make better speech. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? more eye contact, more practice and more confidence are needed. 8. What did you like about the presentation? well structured script and loud voice are really nice.
Speaking Feedback Date : 4/22 Speaker: Lim Mijeong Evaluator: Lim Mijeong Title : First Assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have? I spoke clearly and loudly. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Audience can listen to my speech comfortably because I explained structure of my speech head of it. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Audience can use my speech in reality because I search information specifically about Japan. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Maybe. I tried to speak clearly but I were not audible. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. the structure of speech is constructive. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. I couldn't memorize the script. So I couldn't have eye contact at all. If I practiced more, I would make better speech. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? more eye contact, more practice and more confidence are needed. 8. What did you like about the presentation? well structured script and loud voice are really nice.
Speaking Feedback Date : 4/22 Speaker: Lim Mijeong Evaluator: Sue Min Hwang Title : First Assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She spoke in a big clear voice. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Due to her clear voice and the specific structure, the audience would have had no trouble understanding it. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? yes, it did 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? the audience could understand 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. it did 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She couldn't memorize it, and made little eye contact 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? Make more eye contact and memorize the speech 8. What did you like about the presentation? Her voice
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate :4.21
Speaker:임미정
Evaluator:서승연
Title :First assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
she explained tour to Japan very well. her gesture and tone was good
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
her speech had helped audience to know what they gotta do when they go to the trip to japan
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
she wrote good script which has many quality examples
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
her diction was good but she can work on trying to memorize the script
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
yes. though conclusion was bit short
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
she can work on making an eye contact
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? she can memorize the script and a little bit more eye contact would make her speech more perfect
8. What did you like about the presentation?
her diction and her script
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 4/22
Speaker: Mijeong Lim
Evaluator: Minyoung Jang
Title : About Japan
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Clearly voice
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Trough her speech, the audience can get the useful tips about traveling Japan.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
It would be great if she memorize more in her speech script.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Absolutely
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
As I said before, I suggest that she memorize her script more. If she does, she could do more eye contact with the audiences.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think she need to summerize in concluding part
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Her clearly voice and beautiful smile :)
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ReplyDeleteDate : 4/22
Speaker: Lim Mijeong
Evaluator: Lim Mijeong
Title : First Assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
I spoke clearly and loudly.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Audience can listen to my speech comfortably because I explained structure of my speech head of it.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Audience can use my speech in reality because I search information specifically about Japan.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Maybe. I tried to speak clearly but I were not audible.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. the structure of speech is constructive.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I couldn't memorize the script. So I couldn't have eye contact at all. If I practiced more, I would make better speech.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
more eye contact, more practice and more confidence are needed.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
well structured script and loud voice are really nice.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 4/22
Speaker: Lim Mijeong
Evaluator: Lim Mijeong
Title : First Assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
I spoke clearly and loudly.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Audience can listen to my speech comfortably because I explained structure of my speech head of it.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Audience can use my speech in reality because I search information specifically about Japan.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Maybe. I tried to speak clearly but I were not audible.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. the structure of speech is constructive.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I couldn't memorize the script. So I couldn't have eye contact at all. If I practiced more, I would make better speech.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
more eye contact, more practice and more confidence are needed.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
well structured script and loud voice are really nice.
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ReplyDeleteDate : 4/22
Speaker: Lim Mijeong
Evaluator: Sue Min Hwang
Title : First Assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She spoke in a big clear voice.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Due to her clear voice and the specific structure, the audience would have had no trouble understanding it.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
yes, it did
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
the audience could understand
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. it did
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She couldn't memorize it, and made little eye contact
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Make more eye contact and memorize the speech
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Her voice