Sunday, April 17, 2016

Hwang Sue Min/Presenting in English 1/Fri 3,4

2 comments:

  1. EunYoung Kim

    Speaking Feedback
    Date: 4/21
    Speaker: Sue Min Hwang
    Evaluator: EunYoung Kim
    TItle: First Assignment

    The strong points of this speaker were that she made a lot of eye contact with the audience and conveyed her points clearly. The audience got to know Oprah Winfrey more profoundly through this speech. As mentioned above the speaker talked audibly and worked on her eye contact, but she could have improved the speech by making more gestures from time to time. Overall I liked that the speaker spoke in a clear, loud voice and that she did not seem to be nervous.

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Date : 4/22
    Speaker: Sumin Hwang
    Evaluator: Minyoung Jang
    Title : About Oprah Winfrey


    1. What strong points does the speaker have? 
    delivery message clearly and confident voice
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? 
    Trough her speech, the audience could know about Oprah Winfrey's life story and lessons.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? 
    I could know how much she invested Oprah Winfrey's life. Her preparation was great.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
     Definitely
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? 
    All part of her speech was great. Especially I love her opening part because there are some impact!
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. 
    She try to do eye contact to camera a lot.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? 
    I suggest that she do eye contact to the audiences.
    8. What did you like about the presentation? 
    Confidence!!

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