Feedback from Seoyeon Choi, 4/21 Your speech was calm, and it was at a good speed, not too fast. You made specific points about why you admire Nick Vujicic and gave examples on his life. I could see that you studied him but to make your speech even better I think you could improve mainly on two things! Firstly, you wrote a nice script and occasionally made eye contact with the audience but next time you might want to try not to look down on your notes too often. Secondly, I think it would make the speech much livelier if you make use of some hand gestures-you were standing behind a podium but there might not always be one! I knew about Nick being born without limbs but got to know his life more by listening to your speech!
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Your speech was calm, and it was at a good speed, not too fast. You made specific points about why you admire Nick Vujicic and gave examples on his life. I could see that you studied him but to make your speech even better I think you could improve mainly on two things! Firstly, you wrote a nice script and occasionally made eye contact with the audience but next time you might want to try not to look down on your notes too often. Secondly, I think it would make the speech much livelier if you make use of some hand gestures-you were standing behind a podium but there might not always be one! I knew about Nick being born without limbs but got to know his life more by listening to your speech!