By Song Ji yeon Hi! I think it was really clear that you were trying to talk about stereotypes about Britain. It was really well structured, so it was easier to get what you were trying to say. I did not know clearly about those stereotypes, but thanks to the speech I know that those streotypes are partly true, and partly exaggerated. I think you had an adequate preparation, beacause it was well structured,had examples such as real life experiences. It was really easy to hear what you were talking despite the noise from the background, and I especially loved your tone and the speed. It was really creative of you to use actual British accent. Like I said, it is clearly structured it opening, body, and conclusion, so it was easier to know what you were trying to speak. It was nice that you did not look at notes often and tried to make eye contacts regulary. However, I really am not sure what to comment on stuffs you could improve from what I know ㅜㅜ I really liked how you talked about your actual experiences as examples. Thank you!!
Speaking Feedback Date : 4/22 Speaker: seoyeon choi Evaluator: Choi ji yun 201503481
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She has guestures and keep smiling 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? She made audience get to know the speech by her cute guester and accent 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? yes she did even she holds her scripts she does not see it very much 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? yes 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? yes she did 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. mostly she contact audience sometimes she see table or ceiling 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? At first part, she is talking about acent or features about what she talking aout.That is good 8. What did you like about the presentation? I really like ger guesture. It makes me concentrate on her
Speaker feedback Date 04/26 Speaker Seoyeon choi Evaluator Hermela Abera Title Presenting in English / Vaccation
I personally thought that your presentation would drag the attention of the audience. As you interacted with the audience by forwarding questions for them to be part of the presentation. The eye contact you made was also great as well as your gesture. You let us know about things that we are not very familiar with about Britain, specially the fact that you added your own experience definitely made the presentation interesting. The other thing that made your presentation unique is that you used the British accent and that will catch every ones attention, I believe.
By Song Ji yeon
ReplyDeleteHi! I think it was really clear that you were trying to talk about stereotypes about Britain. It was really well structured, so it was easier to get what you were trying to say. I did not know clearly about those stereotypes, but thanks to the speech I know that those streotypes are partly true, and partly exaggerated. I think you had an adequate preparation, beacause it was well structured,had examples such as real life experiences. It was really easy to hear what you were talking despite the noise from the background, and I especially loved your tone and the speed. It was really creative of you to use actual British accent. Like I said, it is clearly structured it opening, body, and conclusion, so it was easier to know what you were trying to speak. It was nice that you did not look at notes often and tried to make eye contacts regulary. However, I really am not sure what to comment on stuffs you could improve from what I know ㅜㅜ I really liked how you talked about your actual experiences as examples. Thank you!!
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 4/22
Speaker: seoyeon choi
Evaluator: Choi ji yun 201503481
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She has guestures and keep smiling
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? She made audience get to know the speech by her cute guester and accent
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? yes she did even she holds her scripts she does not see it very much
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? yes
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? yes she did
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. mostly she contact audience sometimes she see table or ceiling
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? At first part, she is talking about acent or features about what she talking aout.That is good
8. What did you like about the presentation? I really like ger guesture. It makes me concentrate on her
Speaker feedback
ReplyDeleteDate 04/26
Speaker Seoyeon choi
Evaluator Hermela Abera
Title Presenting in English / Vaccation
I personally thought that your presentation would drag the attention of the audience. As you interacted with the audience by forwarding questions for them to be part of the presentation. The eye contact you made was also great as well as your gesture. You let us know about things that we are not very familiar with about Britain, specially the fact that you added your own experience definitely made the presentation interesting. The other thing that made your presentation unique is that you used the British accent and that will catch every ones attention, I believe.