Speaking Feedback Date : 4,21 Speaker: seo seung yeon Evaluator: seo seung yeon Title : Hawaii, why not?
1. What strong points does the speaker have? I guess my script is well divided into 3 solid points. Being relaxed, extreme sports, learning opportunity
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Audience has comprehended my speech pretty well except at the end I kind of murmured. So that the audience might have been confused
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes I have memorized the whole speech. And I performed a speech without any script what so ever.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes at least I tried to. But I don’t know was it kind of fast?
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes it was.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. I didn’t make any notes or printed script. Eye contact was fine. Except I am not used to perform a speech with that small audiences. So I pretended the camera is one of my audiences.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? Wrap up. At the end I kind of murmured use uh……… a little bit. Because some students it the back just went to our classroom in the middle of my speech, I freaked out.
Feedback from Seoyeon Choi 4/21 I could really see that you practiced hard for this presentation, because it was very confident! I liked the way you made pauses and used gestures - especially when you pointed at the sky when mentioning sky diving-, your tone was clear. Even if you memorized your speech perfectly, your brain might wash out a few sentences in front of the audience so maybe considering to use a short note wouldn't be that bad. Except for the end part when you mumbled a little, overall I think your speech was well done.
Speaking Feedback Date :4.22 Speaker:Seo Seungyeon Evaluator:Lim Mijeong Title :First assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have? her dynamic gesture and tone was very good. so audience can concentrate on her speech. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? sepcific information about places of hawaii was helpful for travlers. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? yes. her finded something unique information. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? I think, her diction, voice level and the other things that related with audio was perfect. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? yes. her speech was very constructive. so we can listen to her speech easily. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. she memorized all script. and she had eye contact with audience while she gave her speech. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? If she move her body more little, her speech would be more perfect. 8. What did you like about the presentation? i really like her natural gestures.
Speaking Feedback Date : 4/22 Speaker: Seo Seoung Yeon Evaluator: Sue Min Hwang Title : First Assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She spoke in a big clear voice and made natural gestures 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Due to her clear voice and the specific structure, the audience would have had no trouble understanding it. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? yes, it did 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? the audience could understand her speech due to the body gesture and her voice 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. it did 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. Due to her memorization she could look at the audience constantly 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? If she would restrain from moving around too much 8. What did you like about the presentation? the body gestures
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Date : 4,21
Speaker: seo seung yeon
Evaluator: seo seung yeon
Title : Hawaii, why not?
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
I guess my script is well divided into 3 solid points. Being relaxed, extreme sports, learning opportunity
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Audience has comprehended my speech pretty well except at the end I kind of murmured. So that the audience might have been confused
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes I have memorized the whole speech. And I performed a speech without any script what so ever.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes at least I tried to. But I don’t know was it kind of fast?
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes it was.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I didn’t make any notes or printed script. Eye contact was fine. Except I am not used to perform a speech with that small audiences. So I pretended the camera is one of my audiences.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Wrap up. At the end I kind of murmured use uh……… a little bit. Because some students it the back just went to our classroom in the middle of my speech, I freaked out.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Overall well prepared.
Feedback from Seoyeon Choi
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I could really see that you practiced hard for this presentation, because it was very confident! I liked the way you made pauses and used gestures - especially when you pointed at the sky when mentioning sky diving-, your tone was clear. Even if you memorized your speech perfectly, your brain might wash out a few sentences in front of the audience so maybe considering to use a short note wouldn't be that bad. Except for the end part when you mumbled a little, overall I think your speech was well done.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate :4.22
Speaker:Seo Seungyeon
Evaluator:Lim Mijeong
Title :First assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
her dynamic gesture and tone was very good. so audience can concentrate on her speech.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
sepcific information about places of hawaii was helpful for travlers.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
yes. her finded something unique information.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
I think, her diction, voice level and the other things that related with audio was perfect.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
yes. her speech was very constructive. so we can listen to her speech easily.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
she memorized all script. and she had eye contact with audience while she gave her speech.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
If she move her body more little, her speech would be more perfect.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
i really like her natural gestures.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 4/22
Speaker: Seo Seoung Yeon
Evaluator: Sue Min Hwang
Title : First Assignment
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She spoke in a big clear voice and made natural gestures
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Due to her clear voice and the specific structure, the audience would have had no trouble understanding it.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
yes, it did
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
the audience could understand her speech due to the body gesture and her voice
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. it did
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
Due to her memorization she could look at the audience constantly
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
If she would restrain from moving around too much
8. What did you like about the presentation?
the body gestures