Hi! First of all, I'd like to say that it was an interesting presentation to watch. Although the noise from the other room and outside made it a bit difficult to hear, it was amusing to listen to the information about Benagil. The parts that I thought were good in your speech was that you had a good natural gesture and voice. Also, your presentation was well organized. The part that I thought might need some work was the overall posture. Because you notes had your notes on the table, it was rather distracting every time you moved to read them. Also, it might have been better if you had more explaining about the place rather than the general introduction that you had for almost three minutes. Other than that, it was a good presentation.
Also, to add some points according to the list that we are supposed to use, the audience could well understand the content and you seemed prepared for the speech. The speech overall had the basic organization and was good that you had a personal opinion included as well.
Hello, I thank you for your well put comment on the way I did my pesentation, I have found your comment very fruitful Samuel, and that I hope to do better on the next presentation taking all your comments into consideration.
by Sun Jin Kim
ReplyDeleteHi! First of all, I'd like to say that it was an interesting presentation to watch. Although the noise from the other room and outside made it a bit difficult to hear, it was amusing to listen to the information about Benagil. The parts that I thought were good in your speech was that you had a good natural gesture and voice. Also, your presentation was well organized. The part that I thought might need some work was the overall posture. Because you notes had your notes on the table, it was rather distracting every time you moved to read them. Also, it might have been better if you had more explaining about the place rather than the general introduction that you had for almost three minutes. Other than that, it was a good presentation.
Also, to add some points according to the list that we are supposed to use, the audience could well understand the content and you seemed prepared for the speech. The speech overall had the basic organization and was good that you had a personal opinion included as well.
DeleteHello, I thank you for your well put comment on the way I did my pesentation, I have found your comment very fruitful Samuel, and that I hope to do better on the next presentation taking all your comments into consideration.
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