Date : 20th of April Speaker: Choi ji yun Evaluator: Dongwon Kang Title : Speaking Feedback
- First of all, what I liked about your speech is that you communicated with your audience by constantly asking them questions and making lots of eye contacts even in the last moment of your presentation. In addition, your gestures and expressions really helped me focus on your speech and the personal experiences that you mentioned in line with the life of your subject(Oprah Winfrey) really resonated with me. you spoke slowly enough and pronounced clearly to be heard but other noises in the room was a little distracting . Finally, the word 'Oprahism' you used as your closer was really impacting and helped me recognize the overall contents of your speech.
Song Ji yeon Hello!I think the strong point of your presentation is the speed of this speech. You looked really calm and focused. I was able to know about why you admire her relating to your own experiences. Thanks to the brief summary of Oprah's difficulties in childhood, I was able to understand what you admire about her. The speed and the tone of your voice was really good. And you were speaking really clearly. There was a opening, body, and conclusion and you made regular eye contacts with the audience without looking at the notes too much. The sounds of the background was bit distracting though. I especially liked ur tone and speed. I think you really looked confident.
Date : 20th of April
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Choi ji yun
Evaluator: Dongwon Kang
Title : Speaking Feedback
- First of all, what I liked about your speech is that you communicated with your audience by constantly asking them questions and making lots of eye contacts even in the last moment of your presentation. In addition, your gestures and expressions really helped me focus on your speech and the personal experiences that you mentioned in line with the life of your subject(Oprah Winfrey) really resonated with me. you spoke slowly enough and pronounced clearly to be heard but other noises in the room was a little distracting . Finally, the word 'Oprahism' you used as your closer was really impacting and helped me recognize the overall contents of your speech.
Song Ji yeon
ReplyDeleteHello!I think the strong point of your presentation is the speed of this speech. You looked really calm and focused. I was able to know about why you admire her relating to your own experiences. Thanks to the brief summary of Oprah's difficulties in childhood, I was able to understand what you admire about her. The speed and the tone of your voice was really good. And you were speaking really clearly. There was a opening, body, and conclusion and you made regular eye contacts with the audience without looking at the notes too much. The sounds of the background was bit distracting though. I especially liked ur tone and speed. I think you really looked confident.