Sunday, April 17, 2016

EunYoung Kim / Assignment 1 / Fri 3-4

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  1. Speaking Feedback
    Date :4.21
    Speaker:김은영
    Evaluator:서승연
    Title :First assignment

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    she depicted tour to Europe well. she divided her reasons why we should go to Europe and it was straightforward which is easy to understand as a speaker
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    through her speech audience can know what is the strong points of Europe as a destination of trip
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    yes she made clear script but she might can work on to memorize the script
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    yes her diction was clear
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    yes.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    she can work on making an eye contact
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? a little bit more eye contact
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    her diction and her script

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  3. Date: 4/22
    Speaker: Eunyoung Kim
    Evaluator: Eunsol Lee
    Title: Peer-feedback

    - As I saw your presentation I thought you are a good speaker right away. It's because you pronounced every single words greatly clearly, and that made me to understand every thing you said with amaze. Your text, length, speaking skill were all good, but I think you stared at the script too much; it means that you didn't make enough eye-contact with audience. I truly like your pronunciation with accuracy, so I believe if you were more aware of the script and made eye-contact, your presentation would be better.

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